45 replies to this topic

[murissa]

aaw i feel so spwecial now i love the poem mashAllah
and you say you dont do poetry ROFL

Was Salaam

[Takbeer!AllahuAkbar]

yeh man MashAllah bro! excellent poem, loved it
luved this bit
'My life was yours to use for a shield '

keep it up!

[Mukhlisah]

Just read the beautiful poem again

I love it!!

[Firdaus]

nice poem bro
Masha Allah
keep it up

[roohiya]

that hit me deep, Jazakallahu Khair akhi

[mujahidah]

salam,

bro that was realy...realy..wel i'm lost 4wordz!
lolz
and u say dat u dnt do poetry!!
lolz

wslm

[unknown]

unfortunatly the bro hasnt been here for nearly a year but im sure he would be realy happy to c that evry1s lovin it. Mashallah top poem.

but just one thing, is the guy in the poem supose to b the husband of the sister? i dnt understand it but its realy nice :thumbsup:

[*Prisoner650*]

bro why would a husband call his wife his sister?

lol its a nice poem mashAllah brother AWAW hope u come back soon inshAllah!

[unknown]

ok its an angel then yeh? or may be another muslim brother..dont know

sorry for my thickness.

[*Prisoner650*]

lol bro now im confused too! i think its just a a general thing that applies to all of us, a brother in Islam i say...

[unknown]

i wont comment anymore, i dont wanna mess up the good vibe of the thread. but yeh, thats our job to protect our sisters n provide them with security and all( but what a failure most of us are )

[sister j]

Wow, mashAllah that poem was soooo touchin. its definately a bro in islam lukin out 4 a sis in islam 4rm bein oppressed in the western society etc. n ye i jus realised 2wards d end how old dis thread is n d bro hasnt cum bak well inshAllah he knos dat we all njoyed d read. JazakAllah 2him 4 puttin it up. such talent man!! May Allah (swt) guide him in dis lyf n d hereafta wid such imaan n mentality inshAllah!!!

[rambant]

the_unknown, on Jan 30 2007, 11:34 PM, said:

sorry for my thickness.

I'm sure your thickness is excused. I think the narrator is a random brother, not acquainted with the sister, who understands the inherent bond between muslims and he knows his place and his duty to his sister. And that fact really boosts the beauty of the poem a million-fold. I wonder what the sister's version of this poem would sound like...

I think this poem is important for sisters to know that there are people looking out for them, though I would like to know how many brothers feel the way the brother describes in the poem. It's true that as a hijab-wearer out in the big bad world, you are noticed and targeted more than otherwise. So it's nice to know that just in case you need them, there are people looking out for you. I find myself registering the presence of a brother if i'm on the bus for example, I don't need to know him, but if he's got the beard thing going on (or whatever) I wouldn't hesitate to ask him for help if I need it. Point being of course, nice poem.

[sistah]

Mashallah that was beautiful!!!!!!!!

[ScentedBlood]

I once wrote one line about this in a poem but for me it was a very powerful line.

For somebody to write a whole poem about it is just amazing. SubhanAllah fantastic work and i dont usually say that..