Something for my sister
Posted 07 December 2006 - 10:21 AM
and you say you dont do poetry ROFL
Posted 01 January 2007 - 07:38 PM
luved this bit
'My life was yours to use for a shield '
keep it up!
Posted 30 January 2007 - 10:14 PM
bro that was realy...realy..wel i'm lost 4wordz!
and u say dat u dnt do poetry!!
Posted 30 January 2007 - 10:26 PM
but just one thing, is the guy in the poem supose to b the husband of the sister? i dnt understand it but its realy nice :thumbsup:
Posted 30 January 2007 - 10:30 PM
lol its a nice poem mashAllah brother AWAW hope u come back soon inshAllah!
Posted 30 January 2007 - 10:34 PM
sorry for my thickness.
Posted 30 January 2007 - 10:39 PM
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Posted 27 June 2007 - 01:37 PM
I'm sure your thickness is excused. I think the narrator is a random brother, not acquainted with the sister, who understands the inherent bond between muslims and he knows his place and his duty to his sister. And that fact really boosts the beauty of the poem a million-fold. I wonder what the sister's version of this poem would sound like...
I think this poem is important for sisters to know that there are people looking out for them, though I would like to know how many brothers feel the way the brother describes in the poem. It's true that as a hijab-wearer out in the big bad world, you are noticed and targeted more than otherwise. So it's nice to know that just in case you need them, there are people looking out for you. I find myself registering the presence of a brother if i'm on the bus for example, I don't need to know him, but if he's got the beard thing going on (or whatever) I wouldn't hesitate to ask him for help if I need it. Point being of course, nice poem.
Posted 11 September 2010 - 09:58 PM
For somebody to write a whole poem about it is just amazing. SubhanAllah fantastic work and i dont usually say that..
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