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Kat
post Jan 18 2007, 10:47 AM
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Salaams All

This is a poem I wrote at the request of a sister please feel free to forward and post as widely as possible. Also Sister Shifa from this forum helped me with some of the lines and ediitng, so jzk to her for her efforts. Also when forwarding please leave the link to this forum inshAllah.

Hijab with tight clothing
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When u wear the hijab u feel good
Coz u know its right
But when u put on your tight fitting clothes
The angels take flight
And stop singing your praises

You’re caught up in the middle
Being Muslim and western
Your mind knows that its Allah u should obey and follow
But you’re confused
About which pill to swallow
And u try and follow the middle path
Even though u know their aint no such thing
But u just can’t resist not wearing bling

You’re young and vulnerable
In a society that’s just corruptible
Taking advantage of your naivety
Models with size 6 and 8 clothing
On the billboards and magazines
Brainwashing u

It’s hard to resist
And they persist
Pictures everywhere
Nowhere is safe
So u gotta buy those clothes
And go on a starvation diet to make sure they fit

Doesn’t always go with the hijab
But u try and make it all blend in
Coz you’re a victim of fashion
Which in every nation
Is like a God
Dictating and manipulating
Young minds
Filled with false images of beauty
Trying to conform

I know coz it affects me to

People comment and talk about u
Behind your back they stab u
With words
Cut like a razor
Are u aware?
Does it not faze ya?
Upset ya
Make u feel that you’re letting down your deen

What’s the point
Wearing a hijab
With tight clothing
Gaining reward
And losing it
When u put on your tight jeans and top
Should u not stop and think?

U cry modesty in self defence
Make the non-Muslim woman the basis
And say Islam urges modesty and moderation
Quote modernist scholars
Those who sell out Islam for just a few dollars

You say women in the west are oppressed
And slaves to man and society
Have no respect or dignity
Used and abused like products

But what about you
Who are u a slave to?
Allah or fashion?

U always justify
And compare and contrast
With those who wear less than u
My words may be harsh
But u know it’s true

I’m only saying
What others are thinking
And saying behind your back
Giving u advice
Coz your actions are harming us

It’s easy to judge
And harder to change and budge
From following kufr
At least u make an effort
But Islam we take completely
Coz halfway Islam don’t mean nothing on the last day
When we will all stand in front of Allah naked

Authors: Showkotali@hotmail.com and Shifa
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Shifa
post Jan 18 2007, 10:50 AM
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Good work bro! I wanted to be the first to congratulate u but also ask.. how is it that u encapsulate a woman's feelings so well?
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post Jan 18 2007, 10:53 AM
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you are the best my friend

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post Jan 18 2007, 12:26 PM
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I have to admit i'm becoming addicted to this site and at work too! and i do take time out to look for any new postings you have especially poetry. this is ggod and many thanks to Sista Shifa, you both did justice. You have a way of capturing thots on everyone's minnds regardless of where we live. One love!
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post Jan 18 2007, 02:57 PM
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mashallah!!!this poem is tooooo good thumbsup.gif keep up the workbr Kat smile.gif
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post Jan 18 2007, 06:32 PM
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WELL DONE!

GR8 POEM mashAllah.gif
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Kat
post Jan 19 2007, 11:36 AM
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Salaams All

Jzk and BarakAllah fik for your kind words, indeed all praise is due to Allah swt who has blessed humans with many abilities which we should use to spread the message of Islam.

Via reading, observation and discussions i am able to understand and explain what people are thinking. I have a keen interest in Sociology and human Psycology which was inspired by reading some of the books of Sheik Taquidin Nabhani RahimAllah.

Please continue to forward and send me comments and suggestions for poems inshAllah.
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post Jan 20 2007, 05:57 AM
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Assalaamu Alaikum wa rahmatullahi wa barakatuh,

Great topic. It always drives me crazy when I see this. It's so irritating. I'm like 'don't u get the point of hijab. why do u wear hijab and dress like Britanny Spears from the neck down.' I don't get it. It defeats the whole purpose.

Good work. JazakumAllah khair.
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post Jan 20 2007, 06:10 AM
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Assalam alaikum,

Mashallah! Allahu akbar! i love it!
you could turn it into a rap song! tongue.gif

jazakAllah.gif for sharing ur talents!

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Kat
post Feb 12 2007, 05:08 PM
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Walaykum salaams

This poem has to be one the most popular ones i've written and also the most topical as well.
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Kat
post Mar 15 2007, 10:34 PM
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Salaams all

A reply i got to this poem by a sister and thought i would share.

"That was the most touching poem I've ever read yet it's so true. Thank you Showkat, Its made me thinking... but when a girl dresses up I dnt think she does it to impress people, its about personal comfort.

I wear hijab, I have to say it doesnt cover me properly, I've always tied it up in a fashionable way, and tight clothing... well when i dress up I always like to have an extra layer jus to cover up, tho I'd say I have clothing that show the shape of my body but not fitted. Wot can I say, I'm a size 6 which can be quiet a mission to shop for especially in petite, even tho that is quiet loose, so I dnt think I've hit the line, but next time I go shopping for clothes I will consider the points in your Poem.

Thank you "
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Shifa
post Mar 15 2007, 10:40 PM
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congrats bro on having made a difference. Inshallah Allah swt will reward you for your efforts
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fazza
post Mar 16 2007, 12:37 AM
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yeh masha allah my man, may allah reward you...
try to get that sister onto the forum insha allah? great response from her too isnt it smile.gif

wasalam
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Adnan Jalaal
post Mar 16 2007, 12:50 AM
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Mash'Allah man!
Always been your fan. Good way to helps others realize.
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post Mar 16 2007, 01:18 AM
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masha Allah sick poem brotha kat
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