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Blood
More honoured than the ka'aba it was said,
But it flows like a river we dare not tread
The screams of the neglected reach but a few
The cries of the children we never knew
No defender, no helper, no guard, no shield
Allah knows what the future will yield
But in hope we pray
And we act in the same way
To turn the tap, to stop the flow
A protector that we will come to know
With honour, dignity and full of light
As they said in times of darkness
The future is bright....
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BLOOD
Started by Jupiter, Oct 01 2005 12:42 AM
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Posted 01 October 2005 - 01:03 AM
SIK. Loving it bro.
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Stone
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Posted 01 October 2005 - 11:53 AM
short, and expressive. nice wrk.
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Posted 01 October 2005 - 12:31 PM
Are u an english teacher or summin lol they are sick!
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Posted 01 October 2005 - 12:43 PM
that was very clear and concise!!!!!!
good stuff
good stuff
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Posted 01 October 2005 - 03:41 PM
Converted Post said:
Originally posted by IQ84L
Are u an english teacher or summin lol they are sick!
Are u an english teacher or summin lol they are sick!
lol, i know they're 'sick' lyrics but i rather not use that term bro. wots wrong with using 'expressive'? lol.
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Posted 01 October 2005 - 04:17 PM
lol u dont tell AWAW off 
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Posted 01 October 2005 - 04:34 PM
lol. AWAW know thats 'sik' but is it wrong to use 'expressive'?
there u go BRO IQBAL.. happy?lol
there u go BRO IQBAL.. happy?lol
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Posted 01 October 2005 - 05:19 PM
lol i think he thinks we r really street n is tryin to communicate on our level lol
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Rock
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Posted 03 October 2005 - 06:53 AM
Great one man its a good one.
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Posted 03 October 2005 - 12:29 PM
I'm lovin your lyrics bro, you have some real talent - keep writing
My wife also is lovin ur lyrics :-)
My wife also is lovin ur lyrics :-)
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Posted 03 October 2005 - 12:30 PM
abu ismael - ever thot of taking jupiter or someone like that onboard?? u could look into it....
wasalam
wasalam
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Posted 03 October 2005 - 01:27 PM
Converted Post said:
Originally posted by AbuIsmael
I'm lovin your lyrics bro, you have some real talent - keep writing
My wife also is lovin ur lyrics :-)
I'm lovin your lyrics bro, you have some real talent - keep writing
My wife also is lovin ur lyrics :-)
Barakallah fee.. Ramadan Kareem
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Posted 03 October 2005 - 01:28 PM
Converted Post said:
Originally posted by Fazza
abu ismael - ever thot of taking jupiter or someone like that onboard?? u could look into it....
wasalam
abu ismael - ever thot of taking jupiter or someone like that onboard?? u could look into it....
wasalam
Don't worry...Abu Ismael is my mentor already!
He taught me 'everything' I know.
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Posted 03 October 2005 - 10:03 PM
oh no wonder why you write such hectic poems here. The future is bright, yet the presnt is dark.
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