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[Lyrical-Honey]

Ponderin on ma present life, wotz hapenin 2 me?
If I knw dis lyfz a test, y cant i change da way I b?
Shaitaanz got full posesion n am struglin 2 set free
Nafz is in control, itz like itz taken ova me

Bt I try 2 keep steadfast, I try 2b strong
Yet I end getting defeated n start commitin wrong
Wil ma outcme b in hel? No no dat aint wer I belong
Oh lord giv me hidayah, y`z it takin oh so long?

Oh creator do u hear me? Do u knw only u I fear?
La-ilaaha-illal-lah, I say it loud n clear
Head up high am muslim, ma intentionz r sincere
Plz guide me plz n make it fast, 4 da end is vry near

Temporary enjoymentz hav no status in ma eyez
Ma heart sez dis is js a test, a deadly wrath wrapd up in disguise
Deen ki khidmah inshallah 4 dis il make a rise
Work js 4 da hereafta n gain a glorious surprise

Av dedicated dis 2u oh lord, wil u listen 2ma cal?
Ma statez stil like da baby, whoz simply yet learnt how 2 crawl
Incmplete make me complete, dnt leav me feelin oh so small
Not losin hpe am optimistic, wil dis b ma rise or fal???????????

Da end! ok 2ppl dat inspired me 4 dis wer Yasmin n Sadia, c ya workz got dat soothin, peaceful touch i realy feel it, ma 1st time n am content wid it coz it felt gud normaly am doin da wild crazy ting ya knw dis aint like me, so thanx big up u2 gyalz n big up da rest a ya`z 2, nuf rezpecz

Luv it n rate it or hate it n slate it, itz all jiggy ya getz meh?

(I cudnt sleep afta sehri 2day )

Peaceout!

[LostSoul]

Aaii.. Check the Skakespeare reveal from the paths within the bronchioles, leading deep into her soul... Let the true spirit be exhaled like Carbon Dioxide... GWAN, you SMASHED IT!!

[Lyrical-Honey]

Easy G u crack me up, seemz like only u b ratin ma work skeen thnx fa bein nice i hope ya not takin da p!$$..Hey is der neway i can change ma dozy title coz it dunt make sense `yo` wot woz i tinkin? Any modz around 2 asist? Yeh n i stil cant believ i came out wid summat like dis lol

[Yasmin]

wow lyrical honey!!!!!! this is the best work ive seen of urs!! excellent! i really felt this one...maybe HOF material....

and sis awww ur so sweetm, jzk for sayin my work inspired u keep up the ritin - yea felt smooth n flowed well. about the name - yea u shud change it - give us a few suggestions n ill tell u wich one i feel.

[Lyrical-Honey]

Jazakallah ya 2 kind sis it dnt deserv dat much praisin u both realy did inspire me am sayin it 4rm da heart.. Da title maybe `a deep cal 4rm within` (if datz not been used b4) or smetin on da linez i duno if ya can tink of summat gud wich am sure ya can den js rename it k k k? am chuffd jazakallah yipeeeeeee i got da modz aproval! x x x

[Yasmin]

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Originally posted by Lyrical-Honey

am chuffd jazakallah yipeeeeeee i got da modz aproval! x x x

lol sis - i didnt kno i had status bein a mod [(Csis)] thanx nyways - ur sweet LH.

umm yea - cant thin of a nname but ur idea is better - but it defo needs a name that stands out - ull hav to gimme sum more suggestions but if i get a brainwave ill rite in down.

[daw]

dat was way cool.
{I just cudnt sleep after sehri 2day}

[Umm Aa'ishah]

alhamdulillah! that wuz HEA-VY sis!
u got bare skills may Allah continue to bless u wit this gift!
keep it up ur flows r a great read!
wasalaams xxx

[salemsanarab]

thats pretty cool, enjoyed all of it but liked the first verse alot... can kinda relate to it
well done, hope to see more of ur rhymes on here, as thats the first one ive read.

[true-muslim-4lyf]

hey LH sis man ur work is really wicked ur a gurl who is muslim an u can spit some stuff like that lolzzzzz wow i take my scarf off 2 u lolz get it scarf instead of a hat?????? lolzzzz any way lame i kno but hey
take care ppl!!!!!!

salam

[Lyrical-Honey]

Salem jazakallah brutha.

True muslim 4 lyf gyal u a joker, i dont like this piece anymre plz dnt giv me that much credit lol respect 2u n hope 2 chat 2u soon.

Wasalaam (``,)

[i-zaki]

that was totally, splendid, posh, extra-ordinary...
DAT WAS SICK!